Nov 22 2016

Don’t Ban Bows by Silvie

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Dear Mr Walker ,

Were you really thinking about banning bows ? Do you not like your pupils wearing them? If your answers are yes , then read my blog to find out more ….

Firstly , all the girls who love wearing  hair accessories ( especially Jojo’s bows )  would not be the same without bows – it completes their hairstyle for the day . Also , banning bows would be a waste of money for people , who have bought bows , because they could only wear it for two days ( Saturday and Sunday ) . Think about how you would fell if you were a girl and you wore a bow everyday and then your school banned them .

Another reason why you shouldn’t ban bows is because they are fun to wear for girls – they feel excited and it makes their school uniform have a unique twist. It gives the normal , regular school outfit some fun !!!

If I were you , I would not ban bows and listen and highly consider my advice . Thank you for reading my blog !!!

From Silvie

P.S Don’t ban bows 🎀🎀


5 responses so far

5 Responses to “Don’t Ban Bows by Silvie”

  1.   Mr Thurstonon 22 Nov 2016 at 4:30 pm     Reply1

    You must be good at arguing, Silvie: your persuasive writing is really well constructed. 🙂 Merit.

  2.   Lennaon 23 Nov 2016 at 1:54 pm     Reply2


  3.   Ammaaron 29 Nov 2016 at 2:40 pm     Reply3

    Silvie Mr Walker is right he should band them!!!

  4.   Mr Walkeron 29 Nov 2016 at 2:40 pm     Reply4

    Thank you very much for your letter Silvie. I read it my class who took a vote to help me decide.

    There were 15 children in favour of banning them
    There were 4 children in favour of keeping them.

    So, the evidence is pretty clear from the children. However, I shall discuss this serious matter with the other teachers and get back to you with a decision soon.

    Mr Walker

  5.   Charlieon 29 Nov 2016 at 2:44 pm     Reply5

    Ban them. They get in the way; they’re annoying!

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