Archive for January, 2017

Jan 30 2017


Warning tale Homework.

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Mr Zigwoo has written a warning tale with a lot of mistakes. Today, I will be improving Mr Zigwoo’s paragraph and then making my own paragraph with loads of mistakes for lucky Mr Thurston to correct. ORIGINAL MR ZIGWOO PARAGRAPH. “If I was you I wouldn’t go messing a bout by that train track’s”. Warned […]

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Jan 30 2017


homework Setting description by Natalie (deliberate mistakes)

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” if I was you I wouldn’t go playing a bout by the tree house.” Said uncle jim. Obiousllly the girl’s whent strate their. an tornado raged and the tree house roof caused pandmoneom.It was like the girls were atacked by the hevy rain. they hated it. poppy tuged at hers sisters arm and said […]

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Jan 30 2017


Mr Zigwoo bad paragraph : homework

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” Ifffff i was u commer i wouldnt go out playing up ner that old TreeHouse” Dad Warnd them. The Girl looked like they understood but they goed they’re anyway ? We always fink its r secrit hid in plase. it is Rely fun their and ; we get to play games like  . it […]

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Jan 30 2017


Runaway Girl by Silvie part 1

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Elina looked at the relentless rain – it reminded her of her worries . She stared hard at the ground , at least it was better than picturing her worries. Suddenly , a gentle breeze started . Serenity shrouded her as she listened to the breeze whisper its stories . She snapped back into reality. […]

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Jan 30 2017


Flash Back Story By Millie

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I lay on the ground – motionless.I reached over to grab Olivia but I had that I was covered in rubble.My panicked mind drifted back to how it all began…”Don’t you dare go playing with that Olivia;she is a bad influence on you!”My Mum had moaned earlier that morning.”Yes Mum,” I muttered under my breath.Of […]

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Jan 26 2017


LONGEST NOUN PHRASE EVER

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The incredible shop next to the hairdressers, close to the gym, behind the bridge ,  under the tower , opposite KFC , by the vets , a few mins yes away from the donught factory , across the great river , at the end of the ally way , in front of the rubbish bins , a few doors away from the bakers ,around […]

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Jan 26 2017


Moving Away Part Two By Millie

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Dear Diary, Yesterday was my first day at THE new school.I hated it.As soon as I walked through the door,everybody was staring at me as if I were an alien.My heart pounded against my chest. Was there something wrong with me.Or was it them? My eyes were filled with the salty sting of tears but […]

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Jan 26 2017


Moving Away Part One By Millie

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Dear diary, It’s official : we are moving in a week! Everything is happening too fast;one minute we have just arrived and the next the house is sold. Madison,Lily,Isabella and I are forever having sleepovers. Without their kindness and advice I am a wreck.Well,I am going to have to get used to being a wreck […]

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Jan 26 2017


Setting Description by Roheen and Silvie.

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Skeletal trees loomed over the city like a trap. Infectious lightning ripped the sky into shreds , destroying anything in its way. Vigorous thunder rattled in mid-heaven. Apocalyptic wind battled the bare trees. Ominous rain cascaded down to earth , causing a flood of water. Saton’s ballerina danced in the eerie sky. There was a war of darkness […]

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Jan 26 2017


Setting description (HOMEWORK)

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The distant creaks of electric bolts shuddered the trees and ground. The shrieks of a branch after being struck by the vicious devils fingers. The city from afar stopped in their tracks to witness the beginning of the apocalypse. The wind swirled; the attack had begun! Scissors cut the sky’s in two while the booms […]

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