Jan 19 2017


Scary weather setting description by Silvie

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Vigorous lightning bolts zipped down to Earth , figuring out its next victim . The sky rattled vigorously . Relentless rain streamed down on to Earth . A rush of roaring wind tore at the trees . Would this ever get better ? The trees were like puppets being dragged in every direction by the wind . Everything was destroyed . It was like hope and terror had a battle and the terror had defeated the hope easily . Darkness had swallowed all the light . It was like a nightmare except it was surprisingly real . The bitter cold wind slapped my faced . The flowers had been drenched by the never-ending rain . What would happen ?

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2 Responses to “Scary weather setting description by Silvie”

  1.   Mr Thurstonon 19 Jan 2017 at 5:50 pm     Reply1

    Super stuff, Silv. I think we could use the passive voice to make the setting (trees, light, even your face) sound like victims.

    PING: Where could you add a dash to make a part of your underlined sentence really stand out to the reader?

    •   Silvieon 19 Jan 2017 at 5:55 pm     Reply2

      After nightmare

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