Jan 26 2017

Setting Description by Natalie

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As vigorous wind slapped against the metallic buildings, lightning bolts zipped down to earth. The clouds had turned into tornados and the tornados had been turned into doom! No one was in sight. The skies sob turned into a impotent roar – like a clap of thunder unaccompanied by lightning. Gathering clouds swarmed into a racetrack of d0om. Billowing clouds transformed into a twisted murderous finger and sucked up the earth. A magnet of mayhem formed into a dark halo death. Jellyfish grarled fingers stung the earth to its death!

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  1.   Mr Thurstonon 26 Jan 2017 at 8:54 pm     Reply1

    PINK: Super metaphors to help me imagine the weather! Merit 🙂
    GREEN: skies = more than one sky; sky’s = determiner.

    PING: I would choose either a jellyfish’s tentacles or the gnarled fingers for your last sentence; I won’t think jellyfish have fingers. Choose one and re-write the last sentence.

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