Mar 24 2017

Night Night Part 1 by Silvie

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Kayla looked up from her pillow and scanned the room. She was awoken by an ominous sound coming from the sky. It was so powerful you could see it. Mid-heaven was a shade of palateless grey : a mixture of the billowing clouds and the dark night sky. The moon , with its devilish face, stalked the earth with its evil stare looking directly into Kayla’s room. Haunted , it must be haunted, she thought to herself.  WHAT HAD SHE DONE TODAY? Oh, of course… her brother’s wish: I wish we could have a storm just once. The thing was they lived in South Africa , they never had at least 10mm of rainfail a year! Her brother’s wish wasn’t bad, most people would be delighted – Kayla wasn’t. Right now she was a terrified 5-year-old girl in an orphanage…

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  1.   Mr Thurstonon 24 Mar 2017 at 8:13 am     Reply1

    Super mix of setting description and excitement through your character casting their mind back. 🙂

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